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IfIamavolunteer,Ican……

IfIamavolunteer,Icanbeapolicemantohelphepoliceman.Andkeepthecityquietandsafe,helptheoldmantoacrossthestreet,andcatchthethieves.Ilovetodoit!

IfIamavolunteer,Icanbeafirefightertoputoffthefire,andhelpthepeoplefleefromthefire.It’scool!

IfIamavolunteer,Icanbeateacher.Iwillimporttheknowledgeandhelpthemtohaveagoodjob.

IfIamavolunteer,Icanbeazookeeper.Iwillnotletthepeoplegivetheanimalsfoodorthrowrockstohitthem.Iwilllookaftertheanimals.

IfIamavolunteer,IcandomanythingsIlike.Iwillgivethejobtimeandenergytodothejobbetter.

初一26(A)班闫子川

2008年3月29日

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IfIamateacher

Nowmanystudentsdon’tliketheirteachers.Theyalwaysplainthatteachersaretoostrictwiththem.Andtheyaren’tallowedtodomanythingstheylike.Idisagreethat.Ithinkonlylikethattheywanttomakeusmakeagreatprogress.IfIbeeateacher,Iwillmakefriendswithmystudents,listentotheirvoice!IwillworkwithchildrenbecauseIlovechildren.I’llletthestudentslistentotheteachers,dotheirhomeworkverycarefully.Letthestudentslovetolearn,encouragestudentstostudybetter!Iwillbealsostrictwithmystudents.Ifthat,I’llhappy.Inaword,ifIbeeateacher,Iwillbeagood

teacher.

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盛夏的时节,东方的天空刚出现鱼肚白色,人们还睡得正香甜的时候,一声清脆的鸟啼声打破了黎明前的宁静。

当一只大学牲发育成熟,步入职场,它,就会进化成一种杂食性的鸟类动物—百灵。百灵,是一种外表光鲜的鸟类。白天,叫一种叫做大厦的高大树木中觅食,由于种群数量过于庞杂,每只百灵面临着严酷的生存环境。他们不得不昼夜觅食以换取构建巢穴的原材料—工籽(工资)。百灵大多栖息在工籽分布,较为密集的城市中心,由于近些年来大量的鸟类涌入城市中心,使得筑巢的成本越来越高,百灵不得不通过过量的劳动来换取更多的工籽。为了节省时间,他们只能食用一种叫饭禾的难以下咽的植物,由于充饥出于鸟类繁衍后代的本能,百灵梦想着拥有到自己的配偶,但是要获得雌性百灵的欢心,他们必须拥有足够的工籽,构建自己的巢穴,对于一只成年百灵来说,为了获取更多的工籽,他们往往还要讨好办公室中的另一种鸟类—会鸡。而会鸡则只听命于鸟类种群中的领导者—CE鸥(CEO)。CE鸥是所有百灵的天敌,他们掌握着百灵生存,进化的资源。为了得到微薄的工籽大多数百灵不得不听命于CE鸥。

而有些面相娇好的雌性百灵,被CE鸥掌控的工籽所吸引,她们进化成金丝雀,直接住进了CE鸥宽敞明亮的鸟笼中。由于大多数百灵没有自己的巢穴,他们不得不用一定数量的工籽换取一个临时巢穴,寄人篱下的滋味并不好过,因为他们要面对另一种食籽动物—房鸫(房东),他们会将百灵辛辛苦苦觅得的工籽分去一大部分。

可怜的百灵,由于长时间保持坐立姿势,再加上环境污染,翅膀已逐渐退化。不能飞行的他们,只能依靠一些机械运输工具,将他们从寄居巢穴运送到工作地点。但因为百灵数量实在庞大,大自然遵循着优胜劣汰的的法则,身体不够强壮的百灵,很容易就会被强壮的同类淘汰。历经艰辛达到劳动位置的百灵,除了要面对CE鸥的刁难,它还要迎接生命中第二大天敌的挑战—科虎(科虎),科虎一遍又一遍地摧残着百灵。有时,甚至比CE鸥更难以应付。

由于觅食和劳动的不规律,越来越多的百灵患上了各种各样的职业病。其实,作为一种出身高贵的鸟类,每只百灵,都有一个在蓝天上翱翔的梦想,可由于构建巢穴的压力,他们往往只能为了生存而挣扎,尽管百灵们每天的觅食辛苦又忙碌,尽管他们往往辛苦半生,也难以走完漫长的筑巢之路。但是,依然有成千上万只百灵前仆后继,涌入这座城市,奉献自己的激情和汗水。因为他们知道,只有在这里,他们才有机会,可以成为真正飞翔在蓝天之上的动物—精鹰(精英)。

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2014中考作文范文

1.学雷锋活动

作为中学生,在学雷锋活动中可以做些什么呢?请以HowcanIhelpothers为题写篇英语短文。

HowcanIhelpothers

Lastmonth,ourschoolholdanactivityabout"learnfromuncleLeifeng".Asweallknown,Leifengdevotedhiswholelifetohelpingothers.buthegetslotsofrespects.Hegiveusagoodexample.weshouldlearnfromhimtohelpothers.Wecanfeelgoodwhenwehelpothers.

HowcanIhelpothers.IthinkIcandolotsofthings.Forexample,Icanhelpmyclassmateswiththeirstudyandotherthings.Icangivemyseattotheoldpeopleonbus.AndIcansentmoneyorclothestohelpthepoorchildren.Icanalsovolunteertotakecareoftheoldpeopleonweekends.

Everyonemayhavetroublesinhislife.Helpingothersisveryimportantinourlife.Ithinkwecangetmuchwhenwehelpthepeoplearoundus.Andourworldwillbeemoreandmorebeautiful.

2.骑电动车上学

近年来,越来越多的中学生都喜欢骑电动车上学,你有何看法,请以Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofridinge-bikes/electricbicycles为题写一篇60-80字的作文Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofridinge-bikes

Lastweek,ourschoolhadadiscussionabouttheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofridinge-bikestogotoschool.Somestudentsofourclassthoughtridinge-bikeshadadvantages,becausetheysaiditwasconvenientforthemanditcouldtakelesstimetogotoschool.Buttheotherstudentsdidn'tagreewiththem.Theysaiditwasnotsafeforthejuniorstudentstoridee-bikestogotoschool,fortheyweretooyoung.Theyalsosaidthetrafficinthemorningwasverybusyandthestudentscouldn'tridee-bikesquickly,theymaybelateforschool.

3.课余活动

近年来,随着外地优质生的不断涌入,中学生感觉到学习压力越来越大,许多同学以牺牲自己的休息时间加班加点,忽视课余生活,你对此有何看法,请以Howshouldwespendourfreetime为题写一篇60-80字的英语作文

Howshouldwespendourfreetime

NowmanystudentsinChangshaarefeelingtiredofstudyingeveryday.Theyareundermuchpressure.Theyplainthattheyhavenotimetorelaxthemselves.Weknowstudyisveryimportant,butrelaxationisalsoimportant.

Howshouldwespendourfreetime.Wecandosportsinfreetime,suchasplaying

basketballorclimbingmountain.Itisgoodforourhealth.Joiningartclubisalsoaverygoodidea.Wecanmakelotsoffriendsandgetmuchpleasurefromit.Whileyouarestudying,don'tfettorelax.Youwillstudybetterafteragoodrest.

4.我的母亲

描述(你人生中令你难忘的)一个人,你可以写你的母亲

Mymother

Therearemanypeoplearoundme,butIlovemymotherbest.

Mymotherisateacherandsheisalsoagreatmother.Shetriestohelpmewithmystudyandlife.Shetakesgoodcareofme.

Sheisverybusy,buteverymorning,shegetsupearlytomakebreakfastforme.Onemidnight,Ihadaheadache.Shewasworriedandtookmetothehospitalatonce.Twodayslater,Iwaswellbutshewasill.Iwasverysorryaboutthat.I’willtrytobeagoodchild.Ilovemymotherforever.

5.你的家乡(Myhometown)

Myhometown

Myhometownisagoodplace.Iloveitverymuch.

Therearelotsoftreesandhouses.Thetreesareverytall.Therearelotsofparks.Theparksarebeautiful.Somepeoplelikedoingexerciseeverymorning.Somechildrenlikeplayinggamesonweekends.Theparksarereallyfun.

Therearelotsofpets.Forexample,dogs,catsandbirds.Theanimalsareverycute.Ilovethemverymuch.

Ilovemyhometown.Itisagoodplacetolivein.

6.谈论你学英语的经验

IusedtohavemanyproblemslearningEnglish.Ithoughtitwasverydifficult.Forexample,Icouldn'trememberEnglishwords,Icouldn'tmakesentences,either.IoftenfailedtheEnglishexam.Now,thingshavechangedalot.Ihavemadegreatprogresswiththehelpofmyteachersandclassmates.IthinkbeinginterestedinEnglishisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell.TrytospeakEnglishasmuchaspossible.Believeinyourselfandyouwillsueed.

7.和你父母讨论“周末学生该不该与朋友外出活动”

Shouldteenagersgooutwiththeirfriendsonweekends?

RecentlyI'vehadadiscussionwithmyparentsaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgooutwiththeirfriensdsonweekends?Myparentsthinkteenagersshouldstayat

hometoreadbooks.Andtheyshouldhaveenoughtimetohavearest.Theyshouldhelptheirparentsdosomehomework.

ButIthinkweteenagersshouldgooutwithfriendsforfunsothatwecanrelax.Wecanalsotakesomeexercisetogethertokeephealthy.

8.自荐信

假如你叫王林,你所上学校的“安心俱